March 02, 2012, 11:14:11 am
This work has been worth the wait! Excellent stuff! However, I tend to agree with others that the start seems slow, the rain somewhat irrelevant, and the visuals for me did not make sense until about 2.00 minutes in, largely because of the considerable scale of the development. By 3.00ish â€˜the devil-in-the-detailâ€™ started to show itself with nice reflections of the extensive scale roofs.
My only small criticism of it is that I think you could have include more animated characters which â€“ although making nice crowd scenes, would have added more to this on a human scale. A mix of static people with people walking paths etc.
* Seems a wee bit too long. For a clientâ€™s concentration span I recommend 2-3 minutes maximum. (Less is more! You have the meat and bones of it all, just some editing!);
* Animated buses/trucks etc. would bring the Transport Hub to life. Low angle shots of the buses moving - one after another could be done as a separate scene with just a road and buses moving, one after another...!; and
* Even birds and people â€˜walking the walkâ€™ too.
Overall there are many really stunning scenes/graphics here, but I recommend taking a weekâ€™s break â€“ come back to it, and edit big time man!
Lastly, many thanks for sharing this fine piece of work. I really enjoyed watching this. Look forward to seeing v.2 - only if you have the time!