August 02, 2011, 10:39:50 pm
Very nice detail and pretty cool for a lot of interior work.
A few constructive points:
-Whats up with the framerate? It's a bit jitterish at times?
-Daylight vs lampposts outside ON, bit weird perhaps?
-Tarmac/Textures on the parkinglot would help.
-The intro/outside scenes up to 1:30 could have been a bit shorter imo.
-Starting at approx 1:46 there's a nasty reflection issue on the opposite glass facade.
A custom reflection point might help solve this.
-Why not put a fire-emitter in the fireplace since you do have Ultimate?
-Use a bit more extra frame edge so your SSAO doesn't pop-up that much.
(it's not really bad btw, just saying).
Love the closing shot, great lights like that!