March 23, 2011, 09:07:23 pm
-Reduce cloud lighting a bit so the bloomy spots get reduced
-Clouds speed could be lowered. You now have a excellent slow camera speed, a very relaxing pianotune
but the clouds look like you're on Antartica in the middle of a winterblizzard. This imo contradicts the mood.
I realize animated clouds are very tempting to put in but in your scene it would probably work best if the clouds didn't move at all.
-Water in front of the house is very turbulent. It's either a whirlpool or there's a micro hurricane hovering
above it but it would've looked better if the water was almost completely flat.
-Try to avoid camera shots showing the void of the terraintile at all costs. This completely ruins the
impression you are watching something that could be real.
-Some plants stick through the concrete of the gate. In real life this only happens in Cambodia and even then mostly on old temples
How long did the whole movie and setup take you?
It's very good as-is already. Looking forward to see more!