January 25, 2012, 08:17:06 pm
Hi Lordbibo,
For a first attempt in lumion, this is a very good start. No "z" fighting in the materials and well paced camera animation. However, you could have made your animation experience more impressive if you did not dwell too long on street views. We needed more of the aerial view as well and probably a focus on one of the house types.
Regards,
Alickn.