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Author Topic: First one  (Read 2128 times)

woochou

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First one
« on: July 26, 2011, 03:53:15 pm »
July 26, 2011, 03:53:15 pm
As usual, comments welcome. Be cool it's my first animation...


Re: First one
« Reply #1 on: July 31, 2011, 12:50:51 am »
July 31, 2011, 12:50:51 am
Good stuff.  The scene is laid out nicely with sufficient added detail to the main model subject.

Camera work that I noticed: I get a little motion sickness from the top down circling around, maybe do that last as a simple go up and look from above.  Perhaps use separate clips to focus on parts of features in place of the reverse turn (the 180+ arc after the top view) as it makes it quite hard to view the buildings.

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RAD

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Re: First one
« Reply #2 on: July 31, 2011, 12:57:02 am »
July 31, 2011, 12:57:02 am
A little bit of z-fighting (the flashing) on top of one of the towers. 
I'm being picky!   ;)

Texturing the buildings will add a little more realism for you also if that is at all important for your clients.  You might want to play with the colors a little bit too.

Otherwise it's nice.  Good detailing of the 3D models.  A lot of time!


woochou

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Re: First one
« Reply #3 on: July 31, 2011, 12:10:29 pm »
July 31, 2011, 12:10:29 pm
Thank you, it's great to have some advices !

Sorry for my very "poor" english.