July 31, 2011, 12:50:51 am
Good stuff. The scene is laid out nicely with sufficient added detail to the main model subject.
Camera work that I noticed: I get a little motion sickness from the top down circling around, maybe do that last as a simple go up and look from above. Perhaps use separate clips to focus on parts of features in place of the reverse turn (the 180+ arc after the top view) as it makes it quite hard to view the buildings.