Author Topic: Elementary School Rendering  (Read 8934 times)

Architectural Innovation

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Elementary School Rendering
« on: February 02, 2012, 02:54:37 pm »
February 02, 2012, 02:54:37 pm
Exterior daytime shot for review. I hope to get the same view rendered at night to finally get something going with Lumion2's new wiz bang lighting.

Bob
Robert A. Christman

BMcIsaac

Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #1 on: February 02, 2012, 05:52:59 pm »
February 02, 2012, 05:52:59 pm
I think this is one of your best. The roadwork, pavement texture, line painting, grass....all better. The skyline is filled everywhere, the contour into the far parking is quite good.
To push further...the roof texture is missing.. You might consider messing up the line between the curbing and the grass. (in PS for the still shots)....and last I like your garden arrangement but would try to make the tall grass plants along the wire fence more randum in size/rotation.
Cheers Bob...great stuff!! :-D

Architectural Innovation

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #2 on: February 02, 2012, 06:08:11 pm »
February 02, 2012, 06:08:11 pm
Thanks. Excellent points!

In my previous render for this building, i took the time to "grow" some grass to break up the lines but haven't been able to spend the time on it. I dont care for the flatness of some materials also. i would like to dirty them up a bit here and there. Its always something i like to do but, i am not in control of my time right now ;0

spot on on the roof texture also. i need to increase the size an re-export. just looks like noise.

about the plants, i was "directed" to place them that way but i cant agree with you more. i even tried rotating each one differently but they show up looking similar. i would prefer to see something a bit more organic but they are going to suggest. I may make a version for myself that alters the landscaping a bit.

once again, i really appreciate the feedback. You have an excellent eye, and fantastic work!

bob

attached is an earlier version during development.
Robert A. Christman

BMcIsaac

Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #3 on: February 02, 2012, 06:44:08 pm »
February 02, 2012, 06:44:08 pm
Time!...I know...wish I had more to. :-D I must say Lumion has really helped me to make better use of it.

blendman

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2012, 01:35:16 pm »
February 04, 2012, 01:35:16 pm


Have to agree with Modelhead here, your images including road textures etc.  are photoreal.  Clearly alot of work gone on here.  I also like to the design.  Do show us more if you can.

Regards,

blendman

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #5 on: February 15, 2012, 09:21:10 pm »
February 15, 2012, 09:21:10 pm
Thanks guys. Here is a quick Night rendering test. Decided to try a quick snow and rain effect too!  :-D

Robert A. Christman

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #6 on: February 15, 2012, 09:28:13 pm »
February 15, 2012, 09:28:13 pm
and an updated left view
Robert A. Christman

Nico RVArq.com

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #7 on: February 15, 2012, 10:06:10 pm »
February 15, 2012, 10:06:10 pm
Robert great image, I have a question:
How could you do the symmetry group of flowers and plants?  :-9 :-9
Putting flowers you've remembered all the equipment Lumion, hehe :D :D

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #8 on: February 15, 2012, 10:24:26 pm »
February 15, 2012, 10:24:26 pm
nicolasweh, I apologize, but i don't exactly understand what you are asking. But venturing to take a guess, do you mean how could i place all of those plants so symmetrically in Lumion when i know there are tools to randomize the size and rotation?

if so, then yes, i probably should have. didn't take the time and needed to bang out an image. i didn't think it was too horrible to distract too much from the whole image but i do have it in my mind the next time i revisit to do more touchups.

cheers,

Bob

Robert great image, I have a question:
How could you do the symmetry group of flowers and plants?  :-9 :-9
Putting flowers you've remembered all the equipment Lumion, hehe :D :D
Robert A. Christman

Nico RVArq.com

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #9 on: February 16, 2012, 08:27:30 am »
February 16, 2012, 08:27:30 am
Bob, was a joke, with a little of sarcasm, sorry.
What I meant to say, was that I imagine what must to you have liked to be able inside Lumion, to have the option of grouping objects and perform a symmetry. It was more a complaint for lumion that critical towards you. The image and all forestry work seems great. Sorry again for the misunderstanding. Greetings

Jacobs Architekten

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #10 on: February 16, 2012, 01:05:23 pm »
February 16, 2012, 01:05:23 pm
nicolasweh, I apologize, but i don't exactly understand what you are asking...

I think that Nicolasweh is using an online translator (Google?). Perhaps that's why sometimes his lines are a bit cryptic.

J-P.

Nico RVArq.com

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #11 on: February 16, 2012, 02:03:10 pm »
February 16, 2012, 02:03:10 pm
JAJAJA tatsrigt

Oh, zorri, I must said: That´s right  :D :D

Aliki_N

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #12 on: February 16, 2012, 07:59:06 pm »
February 16, 2012, 07:59:06 pm
I think that Nicolasweh is using an online translator (Google?). Perhaps that's why sometimes his lines are a bit cryptic.

J-P.

I too do not understand Nico sometimes -joke!

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #13 on: February 17, 2012, 08:36:58 pm »
February 17, 2012, 08:36:58 pm
well, in all fairness, nico doesn't really need to speak much on here....his work says everything. Dude is 3d, Lumion machine!

Bob
Robert A. Christman

RAD

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Re: Elementary School Rendering
« Reply #14 on: February 17, 2012, 09:12:04 pm »
February 17, 2012, 09:12:04 pm
Looks great Bob!  TY 4 sharin   :)