May 14, 2011, 03:07:02 am
Really love the model, looks like a great place to be. Only have four comments on things i would look to improve.
1.) Get rid of the constant path, and break the scene into smaller clips with transition.
2.) Slow down the camera, about 1/4 of the speed would really set the scene.
3.) Make sure your cloud color and sky color is set a little darker, the default is way too bright for reality.
4.) I would turn down the fog, just a bit so not to overpower the scene.
Overall i really think the model is fantastic, a little more storyboarding and camera work will make it sing a song...even without any sound
Keep up the good work!