September 06, 2014, 12:48:17 am
Really nice presentation Nano!
You've got a good hang on the interior lighting.
My favorite piece in your scene is the "glowing" blue art.
If you want me to add my personal critique, I only really have a couple items.
The wood flooring (bedroom and elsewhere) has too pronounced bump or board lines in my opinion. Looks more like decking with gaps between boards than finished flooring. And not sure how, but if you could get more shadowing behind or on the plantings outside (example being the tall green plants along the white wall don't seem to have any shadowing on the wall behind them) Maybe add some dramatic plantscape lighting for the outside area to add some "kick" to those plants on the ground, etc.
That's really all I got for you, because I really enjoyed this. Good Job and Professional Presentation!