WIP - understood.
"C & C welcome"
Architecture+Nature is the design ideology for your company.
That is the message the video is to portray (my best guess and I may be very wrong).
Is this a serious project?
What else are you going to show to get the message across?
Is this an autoCAD model?
The Architecture is stabbing the trees.
Is that connection carefully crafted to be tree sensitive?
IMHO -less stair climbing. Swing out from the stairs and follow them up from outside.
To me, the fun in those stairs would be from the view one has "out" upon nature - not looking up stairs. The advantage. A different vantage point (new perspective of the world) through/accommodated/generated by Your architecture.
Maybe the view out from the stairs is where you see your logo in the distance sitting on the peninsula you built (or something like that) - thus giving you another reason to view out.
Some z-fighting happening inside on the columns and irregular geometries on the wood ceiling structural members. Missing some handrails.
To me (but I'm crazy), The horse feels like a Unicorn or Fairy might pop out somewhere - or it is mid evil times.
I'm left with questions as it is a WIP so this I'm sure is understandable - how does the architecture+nature?
OK i answer you one by one
â€¢ Yep, Architecture+Nature is the design ideology for my company
â€¢ No, this is not a serious project.. just a random concept to portray company logo.. there are many such in the forum.. i am not the only one doing this.. some did it before me... some after me
â€¢ What else you think should be added to the final composition?.. as its a WIP and i couldnt get time to complete it yet.. your recommendation would really help me.
â€¢ No, this is a sketchup model
â€¢ Yes, of course the architecture might be stabbing the trees.. but its not killing them.. anyways its only taking support... from the next time i would consult my structural engineer before coming up with such wild ideas
â€¢ Following the steps from outside would have had stairs in focus.. whereas stair climbing simulated the different views one could actually see while climbing..
â€¢ I actually thought of doing so but that created some sort of fairy fly by just climbing the stairs and not seeing it.. i mean the stairs would then be virtually non-existent in the whole movie.
â€¢ Yep, but i wanted to see the logo just once.. otherwise i would have watermarked it.
â€¢ Yep, i figured out the Z-fighting.. missing handrails are due to an architect intern who messed this all up.. remember its a WIP
â€¢ Seeing a white horse near my logo made you think that.. but i wanted some live and moving things around... you might notice a bird as well.. i didnt want it to look like it was added in some video editing software.
â€¢ Tulips?? whats the problem.. i mean if its not looking good.. kindly ignore it... remember WIP
â€¢ Lastly Architecture+Nature is our theme... and not -,<,>,=... this comment felt insulting to us
although its still a WIP and i cant assure till when it would be the same.. as we are looking for some more great ideas for the same...
and more thing.. i am not the only one trying to make a video logo for my company.. there are many others who posted after me.. and many more who posted before me.. please respect the efforts.. it was our first video and we are working continuously to better ourselves by learning from fellow forum members.