Author Topic: Archway animation WIP  (Read 4861 times)

vishal2

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Archway animation WIP
« on: March 10, 2012, 09:12:44 pm »
March 10, 2012, 09:12:44 pm
An animation made for company's logo and design attitude... mainly Architecture+Nature... at WIP stage... all C & C are welcome...



all credit goes to you pros.. and specially Geohow.. whose lumion earth work inspired me to do it like this way...

Thanks to all

Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #1 on: March 10, 2012, 11:05:36 pm »
March 10, 2012, 11:05:36 pm
... is like Robinson Crusoe & Avatar flying family ...
                                 :+

vishal2

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2012, 03:35:57 pm »
March 11, 2012, 03:35:57 pm
thanks

Simoni

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #3 on: March 15, 2012, 03:32:12 pm »
March 15, 2012, 03:32:12 pm
Nice!

vishal2

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #4 on: March 15, 2012, 06:20:33 pm »
March 15, 2012, 06:20:33 pm
thanks

rahul87

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #5 on: March 22, 2012, 07:04:47 am »
March 22, 2012, 07:04:47 am
An animation made for company's logo and design attitude... mainly Architecture+Nature... at WIP stage... all C & C are welcome...



all credit goes to you pros.. and specially Geohow.. whose lumion earth work inspired me to do it like this way...

Thanks to all


wow great work... what is archway??

vishal2

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #6 on: March 22, 2012, 07:54:30 pm »
March 22, 2012, 07:54:30 pm

wow great work... what is archway??

archway is my company's name.. this animation was intended to outline the design ideology of my team... that is Architecture+Nature

ATTRIUM

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #7 on: March 24, 2012, 02:16:33 am »
March 24, 2012, 02:16:33 am
Great animation!! good camera moves!

vishal2

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #8 on: March 24, 2012, 07:21:09 pm »
March 24, 2012, 07:21:09 pm
Great animation!! good camera moves!

thank you pkosinski...i am learning from the fellow mates in the forum... this was my first video and i'll try to better myself in future ones.. thanks again

ATTRIUM

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #9 on: March 25, 2012, 07:10:50 pm »
March 25, 2012, 07:10:50 pm
Sharring knowledge is the best weapon we have!

vishal2

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #10 on: March 26, 2012, 06:52:35 am »
March 26, 2012, 06:52:35 am
Sharring knowledge is the best weapon we have!

i appreciate that..

RAD

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #11 on: March 26, 2012, 07:46:21 am »
March 26, 2012, 07:46:21 am
WIP - understood.
"C & C welcome"   :)
Architecture+Nature is the design ideology for your company.
That is the message the video is to portray (my best guess and I may be very wrong).
Is this a serious project?
What else are you going to show to get the message across?
Is this an autoCAD model?

The Architecture is stabbing the trees.
Is that connection carefully crafted to be tree sensitive?
IMHO -less stair climbing.  Swing out from the stairs and follow them up from outside.
To me, the fun in those stairs would be from the view one has "out" upon nature - not looking up stairs.  The advantage.  A different vantage point (new perspective of the world) through/accommodated/generated by Your architecture.
Maybe the view out from the stairs is where you see your logo in the distance sitting on the peninsula you built (or something like that) - thus giving you another reason to view out.
Some z-fighting happening inside on the columns and irregular geometries on the wood ceiling structural members.  Missing some handrails.
To me (but I'm crazy), The horse feels like a Unicorn or Fairy might pop out somewhere - or it is mid evil times.
Tulips?

I'm left with questions as it is a WIP so this I'm sure is understandable - how does the architecture+nature?
Architecture>Nature
or
Architecture<Nature
or
Architecture=Nature

Architectural Innovation

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #12 on: March 26, 2012, 02:20:39 pm »
March 26, 2012, 02:20:39 pm
CRhoades, good critiques. i too have been trying to move myself and my clients away from the literal "virtual tour" feel of actually walking around every corner and every step by making smaller "cut scenes" that just transition to different, more interesting views.

i have learned alot from watching videos posted here about that and i just wish i had more time to work on the cinematic feel of expressive camera moves and effects. i think that is the number one differentiation between a decent animation and an outstanding animation regardless of the actual modeling, texturing and scope of the project (to a degree)

i have been so impressed with peoples work on these forums and it has inspired me to try everything i can to make time to produce more interesting movie clips...not just walking around our scenes with a camera on our forehead, so to speak. but, my god, is it a hard sell to certain clients and bosses ;)

heck, GEOHOW can make a short film in one room, flipping lights on and off and making cool camera moves and effects that somehow make you feel like you are watching some artistic film. its great stuff.

bob
Robert A. Christman

vishal2

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #13 on: March 31, 2012, 09:32:15 am »
March 31, 2012, 09:32:15 am
WIP - understood.
"C & C welcome"   :)
Architecture+Nature is the design ideology for your company.
That is the message the video is to portray (my best guess and I may be very wrong).
Is this a serious project?
What else are you going to show to get the message across?
Is this an autoCAD model?

The Architecture is stabbing the trees.
Is that connection carefully crafted to be tree sensitive?
IMHO -less stair climbing.  Swing out from the stairs and follow them up from outside.
To me, the fun in those stairs would be from the view one has "out" upon nature - not looking up stairs.  The advantage.  A different vantage point (new perspective of the world) through/accommodated/generated by Your architecture.
Maybe the view out from the stairs is where you see your logo in the distance sitting on the peninsula you built (or something like that) - thus giving you another reason to view out.
Some z-fighting happening inside on the columns and irregular geometries on the wood ceiling structural members.  Missing some handrails.
To me (but I'm crazy), The horse feels like a Unicorn or Fairy might pop out somewhere - or it is mid evil times.
Tulips?

I'm left with questions as it is a WIP so this I'm sure is understandable - how does the architecture+nature?
Architecture>Nature
or
Architecture<Nature
or
Architecture=Nature


OK i answer you one by one
•   Yep, Architecture+Nature is the design ideology for my company
•   No, this is not a serious project.. just a random concept to portray company logo.. there are many such in the forum.. i am not the only one doing this.. some did it before me... some after me
•   What else you think should be added to the final composition?.. as its a WIP and i couldnt get time to complete it yet.. your recommendation would really help me.
•   No, this is a sketchup model
•   Yes, of course the architecture might be stabbing the trees.. but its not killing them.. anyways its only taking support... from the next time i would consult my structural engineer before coming up with such wild ideas
•   Following the steps from outside would have had stairs in focus.. whereas stair climbing simulated the different views one could actually see while climbing..
•   I actually thought of doing so but that created some sort of fairy fly by just climbing the stairs and not seeing it.. i mean the stairs would then be virtually non-existent in the whole movie.
•   Yep, but i wanted to see the logo just once.. otherwise i would have watermarked it.
•   Yep, i figured out the Z-fighting.. missing handrails are due to an architect intern who messed this all up.. remember its a WIP
•   Seeing a white horse  near my logo made you think that.. but i wanted some live and moving things around... you might notice a bird as well.. i didnt want it to look like it was added in some video editing software.
•   Tulips?? whats the problem.. i mean if its not looking good.. kindly ignore it... remember WIP
•   Lastly Architecture+Nature is our theme... and not -,<,>,=... this comment felt insulting to us


although its still a WIP and i cant assure till when it would be the same.. as we are looking for some more great ideas for the same...
and more thing.. i am not the only one trying to make a video logo for my company.. there are many others who posted after me.. and many more who posted before me.. please respect the efforts.. it was our first video  and we are working continuously to better ourselves by learning from fellow forum members.   :)

RAD

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Re: Archway animation WIP
« Reply #14 on: March 31, 2012, 07:47:07 pm »
March 31, 2012, 07:47:07 pm
Sounds good.  No insults just C&C as requested.
Good luck.   :)