Author Topic: Almost done... Accepting suggestions  (Read 1501 times)

FelipeSantiago

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Almost done... Accepting suggestions
« on: October 29, 2015, 02:02:12 pm »
October 29, 2015, 02:02:12 pm
My last job... it's almost done and i'm acceptin suggestions to improve my render...

KalyptA

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Re: Almost done... Accepting suggestions
« Reply #1 on: October 29, 2015, 04:45:53 pm »
October 29, 2015, 04:45:53 pm
Hello Felipe,
It's a nice Job. Did you try Volumetric light?
How did you do the dirty effect of the wall?

Thank you GG ;)

FelipeSantiago

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Re: Almost done... Accepting suggestions
« Reply #2 on: October 29, 2015, 05:38:06 pm »
October 29, 2015, 05:38:06 pm
This is a texture that I created .. You can download some in
http://www.textures.com/browse/leaking/38870

rakela

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Re: Almost done... Accepting suggestions
« Reply #3 on: October 29, 2015, 06:32:26 pm »
October 29, 2015, 06:32:26 pm
 1. I wouldn't dirty the walls if a new house
2. asphalt = scale down a bit
3. add mailbox, ext light fixtures
4. since model is fairly simple, I would do a nite shot to enhance overall
5. thx for texture link

tildee

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Re: Almost done... Accepting suggestions
« Reply #4 on: October 29, 2015, 06:58:31 pm »
October 29, 2015, 06:58:31 pm
I think you've done a good job. But I would replace the car by a more detailed one. Try for example this link:
http://tf3dm.com/3d-models/vehicles/3 or https://3dwarehouse.sketchup.com/search.html?q=cars&rsi=sbis&backendClass=entity

Re: Almost done... Accepting suggestions
« Reply #5 on: October 29, 2015, 09:32:11 pm »
October 29, 2015, 09:32:11 pm
Hi FelipeSantiago

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blendman

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Re: Almost done... Accepting suggestions
« Reply #6 on: November 11, 2015, 01:42:48 pm »
November 11, 2015, 01:42:48 pm
Hi Felipe,

I think the stain on the parapet is very convincing and adds to the realism.  In fact it is fact of life that almost all flat roof houses confront at some stage.  Very nice touch.

I have a question.  Both the adjoining houses have high white fences.  It is realistic that your client will remain unaffected by this?  :-)

If it was me I would vary the road surface  bit more.  Sure the shadows help, but some varied texture would create more realism IMHO.

No letterbox??  :-(

Great work!

Regards,

blendman
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